“Through the Tunnel” Analysis Paragraph

In the story through the tunnel i find it convincing that jerry was so brave to try and accomplish something like going through a tunnel no ordinary eleven year old could really pull that off . Even though he didnt succeed he still tryed and alot of people give up after a little bit so i give that to him.He saw the big kids do it so i think he say why not . When he made his mom go and get the goggles he went swimming and never stopped intill that one day he tryed to go all the way down to the dark part and he thought he could stay under for long but he couldnt that was a down fall. Just because he didnt accomplish what he wanted he still could hold his breath for 3 minutes i think that was pretty cool .